Your goals are important not only to you, but to the AdCom as well. Rather than simply stating an industry and role, AdComs seek out candidates who also show an established motivation and desired industry impact.
This candidate’s goal is more effective, as she’s shown her long-term interest in her field, she’s identified a problem in the industry and she’s formulated a plan to address it. Her projected impact on her chosen industry will be beneficial and far-reaching, presenting a strong case for admission to the AdCom.