The first person demonstrates his knowledge of “Business English” in long sentences with lots of impressive words. However, his language is so complex, it is difficult to understand the simple idea. He is suggesting the team be more efficient, but his communication style is highly inefficient. He seems to believe showing off his “Business English” is more important than communicating and getting the job done. In the western way of thinking, this person will make a very bad leader – he would burden the team.
The second person says the same thing clearly in 6 words. She doesn’t waste time showing off. She communicates effectively and efficiently. Western people will recognize her leadership potential!